Tuesday, October 21, 2014

Sally With Arachnophobia ..... [spiders; Sally Plumb Plumb; Fantasy; Humor? ; Medium -Short] Comments

Rating: 5.0

As Sally shinnied up a tree....
to hunt honey made by bee,
she stumbled and fell into a web,
and was found by a spider, ....Zeb.
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Bri Edwards
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Valsa George 30 October 2014

'Please, oh PLEASE, don't eat poor me. I'll be missed on PoemHunter, don't you see? ' This part I really liked! Did Sally write a poem on spider, I wonder? I believe even spiders have some respect for poets!

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Xelam Kan™ 25 October 2014

Sally must like Spider-Man/ woman, if she duznt love spiders... again rolled my eye balls over the flat lines this prose- cum-poem, but amazing.

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Bri Edwards 23 October 2014

oops! that is Merriam (not Merrium) Webster! bri :)

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Darlene Walsh 23 October 2014

lol A very entertaining poem. Now I have to go read your 'Spider, Spinning, Smiling' poem. I actually like spiders, as long as I don't see them inside my house. I'm not sure my poetry would be enough to protect me from a poetry loving spider. btw I think shinnied in the first line may be the wrong word? It's a hockey game, according to my dictionary. shinny noun, plural shinnies. 1. a simple variety of hockey, played with a ball, block of wood, or the like, and clubs curved at one end. 2. the club used verb (used without object) , shinnied, shinnying. 3. to play shinny. 4. to drive the ball at shinny.

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Bri Edwards 18 October 2023

shinny (verb) : ': to move oneself up or down something vertical (such as a pole) especially by alternately hugging it with the arms or hands and the legs' I miss you Darlene! ;)

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