Thursday, July 17, 2008

Sally's Goodbye Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sally got up early to find what she could wear,
Then brushed her teeth and combed her hair.
She wasn’t going outside to play,
For today was a very special day.
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Sienna Harlequinn
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Chinedu Dike 15 March 2017

A heart touching sad story impressively narrated in beautiful rhyme scheme. You've painted a powerful picture has swayed my soul. Thanks for sharing and do remain blessed Sienna.

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Genesis Learny 14 January 2009

kayla this is the most beautiful poem ive ever read.tears are literally rolling down my cheeks as i am writing this comment(although its not meant to be a sad poem) i really love the irony in this poem, everyone is looking on the brighter side of the event and celebrating the wonderful life of sally's mother, rather than grieving it.words just cannot express how much this poem touches me.

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