Wednesday, October 7, 2020

Salaam, Salaam, My Native Land Comments

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Salaam, Salaam, my native land!
Shines under the skies blue;
The morning-breezes soft, the brooks roar,
And voices of the singing birds echo,
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Mohammad Younus
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L Milton Hankins 07 October 2020

Your poem started so beautifully, a description of your homeland. But, it ended so sadly that it made me want to cry. My your motherland return to the times when everything was lovely and peaceful. My hope for you!

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