Sakura On Dying Twigs Comments
How cold you feel inside
My whispers blows prayer to find you
Through the first fresh breeze of spring
You may see even died branches start to breathe
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This poem is so incredibly lovely, Soul. And your Author Note very helpful in explaining sakura for readers like me who are not knowledgeable about the rich culture of other nations. Oh, these following verses whisper to the heart- - - see even died branches start to breathe - - How cold you feel inside Day will come after first spring wind When winter spell is broken Frozen road turn to liquid River will flowing free again..................................[this is incredibly poetic science being delivered here! ! ! ] - - Through this very first spring I'll revive your heart To full bloom Like sakura revived on dying twigs - - I am enchanted by your words and I hear you! ................. 10+++++++++++++++++++++++
Beautiful lyricism and imagery in the poem and great photo of the painted eggs. In the North West of England we paint eggs at Easter and roll them downhill. Your tradition is similar and is so well expressed. Well done, Unwritten Soul. This poem is going to be a real favourite of mine.
Thank you for the beautiful words, i appreciate it :) . Well my dear friend Tom, its not my tradition it is my Iranian friend request to celebrate her new year with her family. She stayed here for years so i just try to make it well for them. Im glad you like this work...i wish nightingale can read for all of you how the poem should sounds hahahaha.
cherry blossoms are one of the most beautiful expressions of Spring.. and here you've offered the readers a double ''reward'': through words and picture.. thanks
Fabrizio, dear thanks for your reward too...a nice gesture of this humble poem :)
The fresh beauty of Spring, and its symbolism, are harmoniously blending in this wonderful poem: almost like an hymn of divinity.
Second chance as spring is a time for rebirth and new beginnings to awaken us from the slumber of winter to embrace life and change and grow in wisdom and truth! Superb write! !
This is a marvellous poem having fantastic depiction on soul, spring, and rebirth.I eulogize your poem and expression dear soul, may God elevate your poetic thoughts. Top ten.
Thank you dear, i personally love to write about this kind of work, nature...because i know God creates nature for us to be inspired, to learn to live and to gain...because challenge is scattered around too. Thank you dear Sir.
A beautiful sense of a re-awakening of the passed soul flows gently through your poem. Love it...10+ (I am also very impressed with your picture of your blue roses painted on the eggs)
Thank you dear Simone, i hope you will bloom your spirit along your heart too everytime you face difficulties, be strong.. Yes i like painting, ..blending colours and imagination.. they help soothing my mind because i can express all in what i love for, painting..! :)
This is a very beautiful work, Soul. Out of death comes life....there's the message that we are never to give up hope. A 10.
Thanks MJ, your comment and spirit is like sakura that beautify this poem after it reborn... and yes...There is always a return after we take a leave...either physically or spiritually :)
poetically spiritual... not breeze or spring or voice but soul / souls getting consciousness and searching each other. beautiful.. really beautiful poem
Yes :) its not about particular thing but our soul itself....we are able to direct what we could be..to remain the same or to be best as we could :) Shukriya
Wonderful poem, spring is always a time of renewal and fresh hope.
And to reset all thoughts that bring us down to be in reversal mode... Thanks Chist :)
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7/28/2025 3:04:31 AM # 1.0.0
Wonderful imaginary and imagery. Very cutely and astutely you have, dear Soul, inscribed on spring through winter which is enchanting and has deepest feeling. Spring as a person is calling....... Breathe, awake now........No matter how do you feel now Through this very first spring I'll revive your heart To full bloom Like sakura revived on dying twigs Fantastic expression. Happy Nowruz.10