Friday, April 20, 2018

Saintly Gerard Heals Mama Comments

Rating: 5.0

He's in such pain
When ma is sick
Like he's more ill
Won't take the pill
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Richard Wlodarski
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Kevin Patrick 21 April 2018

it feels fragmentary, but whole, as if its broken into distinct thoughts that tell a story. Some beautifully worded stuff, there's a tragedy in this that makes it all more urgent.

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Richard Wlodarski 22 April 2018

Kevin, this type of feedback is extremely valuable for me. You're right on target. In this Kerouac Series, I'm trying to sum up Kerouac's life as succinctly as possible. Because his brother Gerard was such a precious part of his life, I've had to include him in the series. His story is really fascinating. Thank you so much for your astute observations!

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