it feels fragmentary, but whole, as if its broken into distinct thoughts that tell a story. Some beautifully worded stuff, there's a tragedy in this that makes it all more urgent.
Kevin, this type of feedback is extremely valuable for me. You're right on target. In this Kerouac Series, I'm trying to sum up Kerouac's life as succinctly as possible. Because his brother Gerard was such a precious part of his life, I've had to include him in the series. His story is really fascinating. Thank you so much for your astute observations!
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it feels fragmentary, but whole, as if its broken into distinct thoughts that tell a story. Some beautifully worded stuff, there's a tragedy in this that makes it all more urgent.
Kevin, this type of feedback is extremely valuable for me. You're right on target. In this Kerouac Series, I'm trying to sum up Kerouac's life as succinctly as possible. Because his brother Gerard was such a precious part of his life, I've had to include him in the series. His story is really fascinating. Thank you so much for your astute observations!