Monday, January 18, 2016

Saint Woodpecker And The Uncalled Questions Comments

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Two innocent pigeons were on their first date,
I saw their ecstasy in love on a green carpet,
behind green curtains their touches of nibs,
I saw her though insane in love still escaping
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Akhtar Jawad
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Savita Tyagi 21 January 2016

Lovely poem. Some sermons are better to be ignored.

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Seema Chowdhury 19 January 2016

A beautiful write with a moral. thanks a lot for sharing. a very Happy New Year.

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 January 2016

Questions and answers; but, our sins do expose us. Nice work.

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Souren Mondal 18 January 2016

Love is love, and should not be either hidden or questioned.. That is the beauty of it. As Kelly said below, the 'righteous' have no rights to disturb the moments of tender emotions, passions, and unification between lovers. Nothing is more pure than the purity of true love. Thank you for sharing Akhtar sahaab.

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Kelly Kurt 18 January 2016

The so-called righteous would impose their sensibilities on those who wished only to share love.

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