Saturday, January 5, 2008

***sailing Wings Comments

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If I were a ship, on its maiden voyage
I would invariably face south, only if you were there
I would float west, whatever climatical weather
I would turn east, forge or even bear North West
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Sylvi Sylva
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Ian Bowen 13 January 2008

Sylvi, nice idea for a poem. Well written and enjoyable. Ian

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L. K. Thayer 06 January 2008

'just to have your wind in my sails' - 'to gain your altitude' beautiful imagery!

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