Tuesday, January 24, 2006

Sailing On Comments

Rating: 4.8

He's in this room?

He's not being rocked
Side to side.
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Francis Santaquilani
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Kim Barney 13 January 2015

Fantastic poem. Absolutely wonderful, and congratulations for having it selected as poem of the day for January 13 for the third year in a row!

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Stephen W 13 January 2014

Well done indeed. A sad poem, but significant.

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Babatunde Aremu 13 January 2014

Well scripted. I like it. Keep writing

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Leslie Philibert 13 January 2013

A fine write that deserves all the credit it has become - good work.

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Ronberge .. 24 January 2006

The trip here was worth it. Well done. I too loved the line where the sea had lost interst in the shore. And realizing at the end the guy was on life support... (Well for me that's what it evoked) Amicalement votre, Ronberge

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Declan McHenry 24 January 2006

A fine write indeed Francis. A deft handling of some very picturesque analogies.

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Michael Shepherd 24 January 2006

Perfectly done, so evocative.

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Chuck Audette 24 January 2006

Wonderful imagery and language. Masterful. -chuck

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