Sunday, August 3, 2008

Sailing Into Darkness Comments

Rating: 4.9

I was but a child

When she faded
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James Timothy Jarrett
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Shirley Hanley 27 November 2009

Is this a poem about Alzheimers? Just curious... this has happened to many of my family members including my younger sister. Sad...

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Linda Winchell 11 October 2008

The Mother in your poem had photos to cut out, I have only photos of two little boy the day after delivery. But that will have to do. Great poem! 10 from me. A Mom

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Aimee Nell 28 September 2008

James, amazing poem. You've described something that is beyond words. Well done.

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Fay Slimm 04 August 2008

The slow and deliberate line-spacing make this very powerful to read, and the intense wording cut through to the very marrow. Well achieved Jim although it must have torn you in two. Thoughts and greetings Fay.

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