Wednesday, July 1, 2009

Sailing Comments

Rating: 3.8

On the trailing edge of winter, pale light led me
To the cut, where alder and bowed willow stand
Reflected in the greys and browns of long waiting,
While winter burdened boats slack at their ropes.
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Mark Dillon 05 November 2012

Full circle and the beauty of granchildren and what they bring to us., great write

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Deva De Silva 31 October 2012

Melancholic longings for the yesteryear, reflected in the present.

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Matt Mooney 06 October 2011

A poem, to use a pun, that's firmly anchored.It's my kind of poetry.You expressed your emotional connection with the boat and the memory of your father so clearly and with great imagery.10.

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