Friday, March 28, 2014

Sailboat (A Haiku I Wrote When I Was 10) Comments

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Life is a sailboat
It sits on a lonely sea
it rocks up and down
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Violet Eztli
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Dr Antony Theodore 02 October 2015

life, lonely, floating, rocks.. many expressions in short verses. they are very revealing. very good poem. thank you very much

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Captain Herbert Poetry 24 April 2014

Short lines but very meaningful

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