Sail On A Ring Comments

The ring in the ring you gave Be it covenant ring or a phone ring Transcending like the most cherished being.... //.... Yes, a ring can make it happen. Romantic sentiments expressed beautifully with a handful of nature poured onto it. Makes an interesting reading. Thanks for sharing.

A well written poem. Truly magnificent...5 stars*****

The Ring Made all the difference Changed life to marvel Wonderful poem

The ring in the ring you gave Made me marvel my life whole Believing even more on dreams and desire. /// wow the ring makes a dream and desire the shining future life; excellent poem on the tercet form

Good alliteration and rhymes... Enjoyed it.