Sail Away Comments

This is really funny Ernestine, a pleasure to read! (lol) Love, Andrew xx

I love this one Ernestine, a little light-hearted humour found in this one, lovely indeed. --Melvina--

I think that a thimble would be about my price, loads of fun and a quick mood change in this one, well done, Love duncan

Canoe Ernestine? blow up plastic boat you mean? This made me smile. 10 from finger is hole of sinking ship Tai

As someone who has shown interest in vehicles i cant afford, i relate to this! Your poem has a fantastic feel, and a fun ending. Thank you for sharing. Kindest Regards Slim. x.

A lovely, wistful poem with such a delightful ending it makes the heart smile. Good write Ernestine. Hugh

I loved this Ernestine! Sometimes it's nice to dream big..... and the ending was great! Sincerely, Mary

This is a great poem has everything I love description of nature, true and thrilling philosophy: to be reborn, what deeper thouight than that then the laughter bursts in breaks up everything the word canoe somehow, for me, a crazy perfect word to end a poem and the dialogue accurate, which I love and although I don't make suggestions I do suggest more like these, grand stuff

sounds like a free ride to me, Ernestine! A neighbor when i was a child kept his delivery business afloat by test driving trucks from dealerships around town! how about a coracle?