Sunday, May 27, 2012

Sail Away Comments

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I sail towards the sun
until nighttime falls
then I sail with the
wind and the sea
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Dave Alan Walker
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Smoky Hoss 23 October 2014

Amen my brother! ! ! Amen.

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Patti Masterman 29 May 2012

I think I would make wherever one word..if indeed I could still care..after wind had taken me..somewhere. ;)

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Heather Wilson 27 May 2012

Wherever what matters, not at all, keep sailing towards the sun Dave.

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Eric Cockrell 27 May 2012

if you need help hoisting the sail, let me know!

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Unwritten Soul 27 May 2012

Very beautiful poem, one of prettiest in your collection. anout your note: wherever or where ever is no matter to me...when where sail it meets ever so it became wherever hahaha. whatever or what ever it is i love this piece_Unwritten Soul

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