Sunday, February 25, 2007

Safe Without The Key Comments

Rating: 4.1

Bury Hide Escape

Bury the hurt deep inside
Hide your reality away
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Alison Smith
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David Harris 09 March 2007

Alison, another superb poem from a masterly hand. I know the one step at a time from bitter experience way in the past. Something I'd like to put in a dungeon and throw away the key. Great write. Loved every line. Something I could really relate to. Thanks for sharing it. Top marks on this one. David

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Marci Made 03 March 2007

Bury, Hide, Escape.....impossible to do, no matter how hard we try to run, just to get away...This is a remarkable poem. If, per chance, you chance upon away to bury the hurt, let go....please let me know...........mm. :)

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Brilliant title and superlative work. Memorable, this piece. (Presumably some jealous bad-taster 'one-d' you, huh? Grr..) t x

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Alison Smith

Alison Smith

Orange, New South Wales, Australia
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