Thursday, September 1, 2011

Safe Within The Dream Comments

Rating: 4.0

I looked but it wasn’t there, and maybe, it never was
With me, not in my pocket or by my side
But lost, misplaced, mishandled.
It was a story worth telling, a song for the dark possessed soul
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D.W. Good
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Maybe Lee 01 September 2011

This is such an amazing poem. I love the style in which you wrote this...it's the perfect mixture of dark, mysterious, and troubled. Most of the repetition is great too...I give it an 8/10 :)

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