Monday, February 5, 2007

Safe Within My Mind Comments

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I watched a film the other day and tried to base my poem on the emotions of the main character....

Another living nightmare
My day started so well
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Steffi Webster
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Daniel Tyler 11 February 2007

The merit of this poem lies in its simplicity- the simplicty enables the subjective to come through, which I like. The rhyming scheme is very Betjeman, quite Larkinesque even. I like the hope here, Steffi- I'm impressed.

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