Safari (Senryu) Comments

Nicely written observational and philosophical senryu. Your note is so true. In nature we have much to learn and observe and nature will simply outlast us.

The first one sets the perspective for the rest, Neal. And I like the perspective turnaround in the last; it makes me think of the cartoons of Gary Larson. Hoping you’re thriving in all ways, Glen

A thought provoking poem..observe the struggle of nature, look beyond surface. I liked the way you presented..10