Tuesday, January 19, 2010

Sadness(Short Poem) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sadness consumes you like
the moon does the sun
during a lunar eclipse
it consumes you untill it takes
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C. L. 05 March 2010

Love the truth in this poem.....can really relate to this

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Iron Panda 23™ 11 February 2010

i can soo relate to this at times....i love it! !

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C. Wega 08 February 2010

Quite simple and straight. nice imagery as well. I like your poem keep writing.

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Seb°astian Charles Leaver 28 January 2010

cool, i like it [=

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The Devils Girl 28 January 2010

i love this poem it is so deep and so true

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dude thats so deep

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