Thursday, May 1, 2008
Sadness Of The Heart Comments
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The sun has set the light has been forgotten.
The flowers in the field have fallen to the ground.
For there is no light to keep them off the ground.
Leaves have fallen off the tree.
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7/20/2025 4:44:33 AM # 1.0.0
It's a very beautiful piece, though heartbreakingly sad... I think you could add a second stanza to lighten up it's mood and write about volcanic warmth reviving 'this poor man's' heart so that he gets rid of his insecurities and stops worrying...