Sadness Fills The Room Comments

Drained like a puddle, she sits there trying to keep the pain locked inside, sad and cold she hates the world for being so unkind. the sense of loss expressed so vividly and creatively. sadness, suffering, internal pain... love this.. tony

Sad tale of irreplaceable loss told in eloquent finesse. A work of an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing Maria.

Drained like a puddle, she sits there trying to keep the pain locked inside, ....seeing the life of the daughter fade...... grief expressed so well in lively verses....... i really felt with u as i was reading......... thank you very much poetess. tony

Unable to stop the tears! With the muse of love and pain. Nice work.

Open the window, so the sadness will find way out and fresh emotion need to come in, if you let it be_Soul

agreed with Coleen, although sad but it written beautifully the emotions so alive and yes, this is an outstanding one

Sad and heartbreaking yet written so beautifully. Having a daughter myself it brings a tear to my eye. Such a wonderful job on this. Thanks for sharing!