Sadness As Rainbow.... Comments

The rainbow comes after rain, As happiness comes after each pain, The smile comes after the tears, The life hears after the fears, Wonderful examples and comparisons. tony

VIBGYOR. the colours of the rainbow which fascinates all the poets and children of this world. a very fine poem my dear poetess. thank u. tony

very nice poem! Dark hour is part of life but optimism is much important as the poem shows,

V-iolent, I-rritating and G-rief pains, Y-elling o-r sometimes rare r-elief rains, As if one could feel the others pain..giving new interpretatiions to Vibgyor. very nice poem as usual. thank u. tony

This is beautiful, I felt it deeply.

Very nicely done. 'Miles so far tears apart, Success comes after the start, Then failure starts to fail, And happiness comes to hail..... '..is very nice.