Saturday, December 6, 2008

Sadness And Sorrow Comments

Rating: 5.0

Its just a small story
And I feel the need to say it
I just couldn't take it anymore
The pain he was causing me
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Mia Peterson
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Izik Alcox 06 December 2008

Very heartfelt and emotional, its interesting to see the strengthening of a relationship coming from a break. Great write, hope to read more from you.

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Mia it was a passionate story of love. Love drives our live. Be happy with your lover! Great poem! Well done. Please read and comment my poem Madness to love.

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Min Sia 06 December 2008

So lovely..Very passionate! The powerful words..bringing strong emotions of such realization of a very deep intimacy! Superb!

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