Sadness Comments

Love this. thank you for sharing.

look at the stars so dim in the sky....moon is alone but gioves you so much coolness in return.. it is symbolic gesture on her part.. but the poem is so lovely wuth good rhythm and message....10

THE MOON IS INDEED A LONELY FACE! BUT ON A FULL MOON NIGHT IT BECOMES A LOVELY, BEAUTIFUL FACE! Various people view the moon in different ways! In a place without electricity, the moon provides its light! For the lovers and madman it has its own charm! But for the hungry and destitude of this world it is a vision of a rolled out bread! I have written a poem on the same! 10! - Raj Nandy

sometimes sadness take our breath out to think it over again and again.......I love the write it is absolutely a good picture of write.........

My Goddess, this is an absolute gem of a poem....one I can especially relate to at the moment....well done, such the talent

Meaningful and very lovely poem Grace, thanks 10 Lynda xx

inviting imagery...thanks Grace...10

nice poem... deep meaning

The stars are still bright, in the dark of the night, and the moon is still smiling too i don't mean to be rude, but perhaps its your mood? maybe your just feeling blue!

Dear Lady Grace, Thanks for your invite to comment upon your poem 'sadness' Its a solemnised emotion expressed with exquisite imageries and heart-feli emotion.Good write.Good rating; A-9--Rajkumar N.B.-Sugession for improvement in last two lines-choice is yours: ----- ----- crescent moon epitome of lonely face stands alone in grace. Rajkumar

beautiful imagery presented with a specific emotion

Yes the moon can appear thus to the lonely or sad, and gives strange comfort at needed times..... good short write.... a 10 from Fay.....

It's short but great. It has a deep meaning..

i like it short, but great.

Although this poem is all too brief, it is a very beautifully expressed and written poem, Lady Grace. It is certainly one of the very best short poems I have read in a good while! Carl.

i felt this poem rather than read it..cant help reading this poem without its image appearing in ones mind as described...im not resitant to feeling sadness if its done this way so beautifully.. :) tom

yea i can see gd little short one kept it up

with your words i can see the moon

Within the reflection of the moons tears....the night now cries amongst us......wonderful image

gives me a real feeling of sadness. wonderful lines and beautiful in conceprtion. voted10 surya