Monday, March 24, 2014

Sadness Comments

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sometimes life gets heavy
weakness erodes my soul
pieces and pieces already
till it became a big hole
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Houssam Mokhtari 02 September 2014

It's just showing your inner and reveals how sad you were I hope you are ok and yeah good poem :))

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Alookh (matin) 17 April 2014

wow! great! its a perfect poem Asma! i did enjoy the rhymes...and the meaning...i really liked it :)

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Chey Gibson 24 March 2014

awsome poem thats supper awesome i've never read a poem that deep

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