Friday, February 4, 2005

Sadness Comments

Rating: 1.8

Left alone in the cold to die
All around on me, people spy
I scratch for the food I eat
And drink water that's lame
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Jamie Parker
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Sean De Montfort 15 October 2005

once again good content very good.Poor spelling and poor structure and would be better if rhymed

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Jamie Parker 09 March 2005

Thanks everyone for rating it ten. It's the only one that is! (: Jamie

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