Sadness Comments

At the end of any tonnel There is light Arise, Awake and Act For tomorrow belongs to you.

so far all good keep writeing you know you should. sadnees do you feel this way i hope not can i make it go away

the last line gives a good advice, , , , good poetry is about feelings

Your sadness is well brought out in your lines... Your last line is your mind in conclusion...A true and powerful write from the very bottom of a sensitive heart! Poets are made.......with feelings and emotions raw driving them to spin out words to express to one or all Excellent efforts...do keep writing Spellings are in need of attention in some...... But your work does drive one to read on.......so all the best pal! Cheers!

christopher this poem has so much depth. i really liked this poem. well done. keep on writing you write very well and from the heart and the most important thing in poetry is purity of thought and heart and after going through your poems i can see that you have both. excellent and good luck

the last two lines, , , 'laughing like crying'...and.carefree under stress, live without sadness' gives hope, , nice write