Saturday, May 7, 2011

Sadness Comments

Rating: 5.0

I keep it in my pocket, so to speak,
this uncomprehensible sadness,
or rather sense of weakness and inability.
I don't want to get up,
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Achim Wollscheid
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 07 May 2011

Nice poem. Very well conceived. Rich in imagery and style. Fine poetics. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box by typing the name of the poem if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.

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Tai Chi Italy 07 May 2011

A real 'Ouch! ' poem. There is nothing worse than being unappreciated! I should fooking know! lol smiling at you Tai

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