Monday, January 12, 2015

Sadness Comments

Rating: 5.0

Thick smog
Dark blanket
Of sorts
Smothering
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Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi
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Rajnish Manga 13 January 2015

One is overwhelmed by the atmosphere of sadness created by the poem from beginning to the end. Following lines are just outstanding: Seems / My Sun is now / Swallowed / By eternal / Eclipse.

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