Monday, December 21, 2015

Sadness Comments

Rating: 5.0

Deep within, on the inside, I feel a cry, a terrible mire; a hole within, a sickness inside.
Beneath the smiles, beneath the hi's, a feeling of sadness, that tears my insides.
To express it best, words I cannot confess, but written out, it lessens the stress.
Why has this come, as if a test, the deepest parts, are without rest. Looking within I seek to rest, but find out things that leave me restless.
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Abraham John Jaggernauth
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Jesus Diaz Llorico 21 December 2015

Sadness is part of life, but this poem was expressed beautifully. Rated 10+

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Abraham John Jaggernauth

Abraham John Jaggernauth

Trinidad & Tobago
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