Thursday, April 6, 2006

Saddam's Poem Comments

Rating: 2.8

At first he came with gifts
and money for the bank
he pointed out the rifts
amongst our folks, that Yank.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Herbert Nehrlich1 06 April 2006

What's a rythym? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? / H

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Declan McHenry 06 April 2006

It's all rather tame. Nothing new here. Both the rythym and rhyme are rather languid. All in all a rather passionless piece. Fair message but contrived.

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