Sadak K Kinaare.. Comments

wha waaah kia kahney hain kia bahtareen aur khoobsoorati se izhar e bayan kia hai. aur kia hi khoobsoorati se manzar kasha..lajawab..

The image: Kagaz ke phool gives the essence of the thought.

A nice description of a big city where poor persons love in polluted air and unending noise.

Wah wah kya baat hai, Aapne jo sheher ka naksha khicha hai woh kabile-daad hai, laga yun ke jaise wo manzar nazron ke saamne se guzar gaya Ek sheher yun bhi dekha hai humne unki nazm mein.....Awesome, Beyond ratings yet maximum 10/10

Assam key jungle ek deewal mera........ duja deewal ranthambor mera ....... himalaya ki chat aur hind maha sagar darwazey pe beh raha........ gareeb......? Mehanti hun, imandar hun, desh bhaqat hun, kuddar hun....... jawab bhaut hai sunney aur sunnaney ko...... mein to aapni bharat maa ka ek sawaal hun...... grrrtt penned mam ji........ emotional.... emotion p'ssss

I will comment on this on English since my Hindi is not as good as the skills required to praise this poem.. To begin with one of the most essential aspect of GOOD literature is that it always serves as a mirror to life/society.. Your poem takes minute observations into the life of those who live on the roads and represents them in a very poetic and wonderful manner.. You have a natural talent of language and that is absolutely evident here as we read the poem out loud.. All and all, this is one of the best poems of yours that I have read.. Wonderful Abhilasha.. A beautiful poem..