Sad Woman Comments

‘…My solitude is a chosen pray, is pure….’ Excellent line…touchy…hearty… Ten+++ Ms. Nivedita UK

loss is a great sadness..i understand...and the oceans of darkness...very nicely written..thank you Marieta ~^..^

Thank you for telling me about it! I think I understand it 10

Amazing poem. Very intelligently woven..Great work... 10

this is such a great poem and the words flow beautifully 10

My thoughts are an ocean of darkness, My solitude is a chosen pray, is pure 10

A beautifully worded poem, heartfelt and touching. 10

nice poem, touching 10

Very touching poem. Bring back some old memories. Sad but expressed well. I like this poem

a heartfelt poem... I touched your sadness. your deep expressions were penetrated my soul. great. great.

I love this poem! You express your feelings in a deep and very sensible way! thank you for sharing

Touching piece. Sparked some memories...

But if I knew you would not come, No longer would I wait for you, For you was all I had built at home, For you was all I tried to do..... if i knew u would come then i would have waited with rose petals.. what a lovley ida behind poemm.. i liked the idea...10 read mine... home bound.. come home... buttterflies around and no separate ways... all in one thought and may augment ur views

'My thoughts are an ocean of darkness, My solitude is a chosen pray, is pure. So might I, waiting you with this hopeless Have tears, that would help me to endure? ' Beautiful poem- nice ending- 10+++

My thoughts are an ocean of darkness... I like this sentence.

even in waiting, there is the charm of experiencing pangs of loneliness and heartaches! what is love without these feelings.we wouldnt know love at all.its a beautiful poem and i really enjoyed it.

such a loves pink tear, clear as the bell that sings your name, an ocean with you adrift on a log of little choice to drift untill the mouth a sun can hold you deep inside to rain again...iip

My solitude is a chosen pray, is pure. So might I, waiting you with this hopeless thanks for this full dose of hope....

nice melancholy, beautiful picture

As this white lily that blooms today And tomorrow it may not be. Beautiful and bitter sweet.10.