Thursday, December 31, 2009

Sad State Of Affairs Comments

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It’s a sad state of affairs
When you start to loose your friends
No one there to show they care
You even miss them driving you round the bend
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Kaspa Richards
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blank blank 05 January 2010

My favourite part of this poem is 'On this mountain of life I see people climbing......... / When you realise you’re the one slipping and sliding' great poem thanks for sharing

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Heather Quail 31 December 2009

I can relate to this poem on some levels. the line where you say' To not remember the years growing up except the fights between your family' That was me... I grew up with a rough childhood but i don't let it bring me down, I find comfort in writing.. I think this is a very good poem.

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