Friday, October 4, 2013

Sad Square Of Blue Comments

Rating: 4.5

A birthday has come
With no one to fill it.
On the calendar it lies,
Outlined; a sad square of blue.
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Susy Evelyne
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Khairul Ahsan 28 November 2013

Your poem is beautiful! Sad, void, feelings. 'Or a glass vase that has held Many a lovely rose But today holds none.' Touched me.

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 04 October 2013

Sad but a very lovely write, one can feel the loneliness and the truthfulness it conveys, Beautiful.

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Susy Evelyne

Susy Evelyne

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