Thursday, December 8, 2005

Sad Santa Comments

Rating: 5.0

I saw a deflated Santa
drooping from a roof.
Maybe a robin pecked him
but I think, to tell the truth,
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Mike Morris
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Cynthia Aluning 18 December 2005

I dont know if I would say HO HO HO...maybe HA HA HA. Comical, I love the flow of its rhymes and accurate syllable counts huh! I bet even school graders can relate on this poem....so its for all ages. Wonderful! HAPPY HOLIDAYS

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Cj Heck 08 December 2005

Delightful Poem, Mike! Rhythm and rhyme are perfect, too. Very well done - I loved it. Warmest regards, CJ

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