I’m sad to hear that you’re in pain
You feel at times your life’s in vain
Sometimes you don’t know what to do
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very much positive pushing type of write...theme well conceived well presented Marilyn...thanks...10
Marilyn, it is always sad when we hear of a friend in pain, but this poem should sooth the hurt they feel. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. Hugs David
Nice soothing poem.... 'I will read and comment on sad poems But let’s remember, our life’s on loan' ......... Sooooooo Sweet of you. 'So try to find happiness where you can I truly believe that IS God’s plan! ' ........... Sooooooo comforting. Makes me feel the divine presence even in cyberspace.... A sweet 10!
Nice one, interesting title too