Sad Poem Comments

COOL and SURPRISING ending! you have a sense of humor/(humour for our overseas affiliates) as i do. love it. and the rhyming...........superb! like mine! ! ! i especially enjoyed: I know the reason you had to go, But my grief I can't contain, It's my moral duty to let you know, Memories of you will forever remain. .........even though i copied it and planned to paste it BEFORE i realized the un-human subject of your poem. yes! sausage-stealing is a grievous sin. :) thanks for sharing. another one for the MyPoemList and i think i'll make you a friend..........even though i hardly know ya. thanks for sharing. i hope you don't mind....i plan to send this poem to a ph friend in india. she loves my humor (and me i think!) ;) bri

I swear I saw a heavenly glare. good write, thanks.