Wednesday, October 26, 2011

Sad Men Comments

Rating: 5.0

Eating at the feet of the living,
Come home to where the old rest.
Fragile in his existence, he trips
On what has never truly been there.
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Stefanie Fontker
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Dave Walker 27 October 2011

A great poem, very strong and powerful as always. Good write.

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Romeo Della Valle 26 October 2011

A very deep outburst of the heart clearly manifested in this great write! 10+++ Keep it up! My dear friend and God Bless You for always! Love and Peace! Romeo from New York City!

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Kevin Patrick 26 October 2011

There's bitterness, but it does leave an impact and thats what I like, confrontational honesty. I usually lie three times before breakfast

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