Friday, June 13, 2008

Sad Love Story Comments

Rating: 5.0

Two lovers in a parlor
Who have just sat down to eat
But they're being watched
From across the street
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norman hale
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Christina Smith 14 April 2009

Not a nice story, but I like the way you are trying to show that this is not the way to live your life or love. Great rhyming. Very good! 10 +++

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