Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Wednesday, August 29, 2012

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I decide to stop posting
On "Muse India" with silent protest
As articles go unnoticed or unread
A sign of ungratefulness to the dead
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 August 2012

Hasmukh Bhai, “I migrate to green world where I hope to settle It may be possible there I will be among herds of cattle” These lines remind of Shelley’s Ode to the West Wind Your true feelings will always remain in my mind Do write something about the life of cattle The pastoral elements will show your mettle KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karntaka - 581343 Aug 30,2012

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The Reader 29 August 2012

of course it's not the matter of forcing the readers...but there is a tenor between the reader n writer...n communication process does not get completed unless read n understood...n given the feedback....

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 August 2012

T. Hagan7 minutes ago good flow

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 August 2012

Lilly Emery2 minutes ago good Comment +1 good flow

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 August 2012

Understood William van NieuwenhuyzeLess than a minute ago I hear you. What I can say as an offer of support: work on your grammar, and never let the lack of votes or reviews stop you from writing. Some of the most popular poets do not write half as good as what I've read here, so don't worry, and have faith that poetry is not dead! Comment +1 good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 August 2012

Weeping willow Sorry to see you go, but I understand as it does seem that only a few read what others write.Most just post and don't bother to read what others say.God bless and grow as a poet may you find what you are looking for; ]

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 August 2012

I decide to stop posting On “Muse India” with silent protest As articles go unnoticed or unread A sign of ungratefulness to the dead

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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