Sad Girl: U Could Say Her Horrible Life! ! ! But Damn The World Aint Got No Pity! ! ! Comments

Great work The story behind it, the words you chose......great! Scale 1-10..10!

the poem was really good. just some advice you might want to put a little more imagery in it, if you can, and if you can't i can help you. :) i would be delighted.. ~Hazel G.E

Good diction and nice flow.

A great poem, The title said it all. the explanation was perfect

LOL amazing! ! ! ! ! ! I've never read a peom like this :) I love it :) 10+! ! ! ! ! !

the way you express your feelings is very unique and very good. another great work

Emily, there are wolves in lover's garb. You sing pathetically and expose their cruelity. A very appealing poetry. CP

Bitter, twisted material, but well executed and very real.

Well I'm just 14 and do understand a heart break... but don't be this sad... we all go through this.. and the wisest thing to do is to learn from the expreince... you'll be ok.. life goes on.. and I know sometimes we feel it's too much that time would not erease but it will, little by little... aside form that is avery nicely written poem.. I like it a lot. Best Wishes, Ana Lia Zaldivar

my little girl, DON'T BE SAD...WHY? ....u shud be happy all the way...njoy ur life, ...for life s beautiful if u know how to live...be positive to urself...dont lost hope....WE ARE PRETTY, ...WE ARE LOVABLE...WE ARE GIFTED, always put that n ur mind..

wow... the peom definitly gives off an depressing feeling... but yet, if you look at it, and read it... it can be a truly understanding peom, and its calling for help, gives off a depressing feeling.. but its really well written...