Sad Eyes Comments

omgsh, I think i know what this is about. You said you were adopted right? Is this about your real mother, just a guess. But even if its not its deffinetly about someone that walked out on you. Great way of putting your words. You show your emotion good, its very deep. Its so beautiful. I love the way u describe it like a dongene with black walls and emtiness. Awesome descripsion. -meghan

WOW....thats so deep.I love it.

Very touching! Lots of imagination! Keep writing! Lilly

Beautiful imagery! Absolutely full of imagery which gave me a chill to feel what you were feeling when you wrote this poem...very sad and heartwrenching way to describe a love/friendship that has ended. I am sorry for your pain...unfortunately with each great poem written the poet must have felt 'Something' deeply.......U sure did in this one. Please keep sharing you are so talented! Take care of U =Shelley= 10/10

sob..sob..realy touching.

nice writing, like it

What a nice piece, Mariana! Try to depend on NOONE in your life, even if that's someone really special that you need their love and affection. Life sucks for some people and that's that. One shouldn't self-destruct, but should try to make the best out of what is offered. Keep writing beautiful poetry, CeCe

Dis is my favorit one! ! ! ! ! ! ! -signed- *tasha marie*

such an amazing poem. you're such a good writer

Amazin write mariana... all the best and more Roger