Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Wednesday, February 1, 2012

Sad Days Comments

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I remember those sad days
Life with lots of problems on the way
No cheers but question of life and death
Fight for square meals a day and unable to breath
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Brianna Winebarger 02 February 2012

This is an inspirational poem and it has a type of joyous aura about it. The only thing wrong with it is the mistake in the first stanza, third line. Should pf be of? Beside that this poem is fantastic!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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