Sad Cypress Comments

wow... good usage of rhymes... :)

Your ryhming is excellent asi s your command of language but your writing lacks the essential meter t makeiflow like melted Ghee

Autumn started and so one reads this poem before 'Spring'. Truthfulness of inspiration in these melodious lines. I recall some of the French symbolists, and an Italian poem by Giosuè Carducci, 'In Front of St. Guy's Church'.

the beauty i can see but i cudnt decipher some words which are anew for me. so will revisit a couple of times. let its truest essence settle down in me. yet, the beauty of writing in short is awesome.

This poem is amazingly expressive. Wonderfully crafted. Thank you very much.

My 10 for this lovely poem Koyel.

koyel... well written *10*

Avery good description of what you see in imagination as you look at that tree Koyel. Keep up your writing.

such a lovely poem. only God knows what and why of everything and we can share with him without any fear. well done

nice metaphorical write i like it.....thanks 10

yes koyel, you are really gifted with this rare gift. You can 'touch' on any topic. I love reading you. +++10 lovesssssssss anju

You are gifted with a great talent. It's really beautiful you have written in your words. Keep it up.

This is a very expressive poem, Koyel, and one that is written quite well also. Though a fairly brief poem, it's imagery is both sharp and very well communicated to the reader. It is much like a fine painting, showing the viewer perhaps a facet of life that they had not previously thought about. In that respect, you have touched upon what writing poetry is all about. Carl.

A breakthrough piece well written! .Well done Mitra.

This is very interesting piece. you could have expanded the idea a little more so that it becomes more lucid in expression and clear for perception. As Saurav said your earlier poems are even better....9

Very touching in its innocence. I like your poignant, lyrical style. Always your friend, Sandra

Outstanding work! ! ! ! ! Koyel...Keep it up...However, I think the Prince of the Night is still the Best of Yours that I have Read.........

a metaphorical write...good...i liked 10

yea,10 for this here words slowly and deeply impressing/touching...well penned indeed.

Such a lovely sad piece, Koyel well penned regards Tom