Wednesday, July 20, 2011

Sad But True Comments

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Friends, you can find them wherever you go.
Some, not necessarily there must be an occasion for them to say hello, and a few without looking at the hour, will call you in the middle of the night, to tell you their feelings or simple asking if everything's alright.

Unexpectedly, some came in our lives, and stay and that very moment their memories never fade away. Together they share our deepest secret, desire, cries and joy, and then there are those kinds of friends that hide their deepest aim. They greet you with a happy smile. Share secrets that only last for a while. Eat and drink with you and pretend to share your sorrow, even giving false hopes that will be a better tomorrow, but the minute you turn your back they relate and revile about your life. Why wasting time asking why? No time to bow down and cry. Even if tears should fall called it just a lesson.
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Robert Melliard 11 August 2011

I have read this poem and I like it, but I have to say that if it were mine I would try to break it into shorter lines, partly in order to bring out the rhymes. By the way, thank you for commenting on my poem 'Loss'.

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