Friday, September 9, 2011

Sacrificed Comments

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That girl, the same girl of bright eyes
Who loves me for years approached me with a knife
The point of lose unaware of the age should not
Come again, no chance to leave, le the time end
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Aranthabailu Ummar
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Nanthinii Mohan 10 September 2011

Emotionally articulated poetic verses.......well done!

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Unwritten Soul 09 September 2011

Deep red emotion truly reappeared...but time has start from now to move on leave the scar for a heal continue..Sacrifice the time to keep new learn, sacrifice the precious for something more conscious, the more we sacrifice the more we have as long we know how to move forward and what we need and aim...You claimed as being sacrificed yet you will be free to claim the right price equally (good redemption) ..Nice write_Unwritten Soul

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