Wednesday, November 26, 2008

Sacrifice For A Loaf Of Bread..... (...For All Those Who Lost Their Life Starving For Food....) Comments

Rating: 5.0

My mom used to have me close and tight over her waist
and for the whole day we used to be under sun's face
I don't know why mom keep on knocking at car door's on the road
besides most of the people from inside stare at her and scold
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Sebastine Humaemo
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Brian Jani 04 July 2014

Its heart aching to think that some people starve to death.A touching poem here

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Lynda Robson 09 December 2008

A very humble write Sebastine, parents do sacrifice things for their children, no one should have to die of starvation today, its so sad, 10 Lynda xx

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Chitra - 26 November 2008

the stark reality palying havoc with millions well captured in these sensitive lines we need more people like you to enlighten and motivate the world

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Joseph Poewhit 26 November 2008

HUNGER is the worst thing in life. I support 6 children in foreign countries. In fact MUNNU in India - growing like a bean pole

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Reshma Ramesh 26 November 2008

a sad story well penned........we see it everyday on the streets......

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C T Heart 26 November 2008

Such a beautiful, so meaningful narrative poetic theme...heartfelt in a way for it speaks about poverty especially in the third world countries...Keep writing for your composition is making a great sense to the world. a 10.

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