Sunday, August 11, 2013

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Rating: 4.3

They saw you in my eyes
When I heard your name
And began to cry
They heard my heart beats beat
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Ala' Elouri
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Saif Ali 16 September 2013

its an amazing poem has deap meanings i acuatlly loved it: D

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Ala' Elouri 10 September 2013

thank you very much for the comments :) It is my pleasure!

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Sadnessromeo Shakespeare 09 September 2013

nice one. simple words with deep meaning, all what u need to write a beautiful poem.

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Ala' Elouri

Ala' Elouri

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