Wednesday, November 5, 2008

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You are the person i want,
My dream come true.
You gave me love, you gave me a joy
A mistake i made though don't know why?
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harshika ram
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Nithin Pradeep 08 November 2008

hey harshika! I really appreciate u for such a charming poem.I cant write on such a theme! But once you select such a theme, u shud view it from different angles every time u write. for example, try something like nature or ur love for some small stuff. you can include things like symbolising it with something else too!

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